Score: 7

"pretty good."

by: the-light-within-all

date: February 25, 2007

It made for a better opening for a flash series. It could use with a bit of fixing. The drawings are not all that great (but I'm not saying I can do better). Otherwise it is pretty good. You should create another one.

Score: 5

"I've seen much worse..."

by: BlackCaliber

date: February 24, 2007

... especially for a beginner. Hell, my first cartoon was about two stick figures fighting eachother for 10 minutes straight. However, I kept it simple. You change the music way too much. That was the biggest problem. Obviously you're not much of a drawer or animator either but it could be you're just not good with a mouse. You'll get much better if you keep trying. I like how you didn't have a lot of dialogue. That's good because you won't have to worry about your english. It's not my favorite but it's a start.

Score: 8

"its a great first attempt"

by: MemLCol

date: February 24, 2007

i know nothing about flash as i cant afford ne flash programs... lol but i enjoy watching movies! and i loved this one... i have seen alot of 1st attemts in my time and yours is right up in the ranks..

the piccys are good maybe a little more pratice needed

the sound was good, juyst a few mili sec's of white noise

the anamation was great, i liked the hair moving and the stretching worked well but the hugging and such could have been slightly better.

keep it up, ill be keeping an eye out for your next one ^_^

and who lets people like the 1st person to reveiw this exist... that guy was just rude O_o

Score: 7

"Good!"

by: JustTom

date: February 24, 2007

This is good! You have a good start because You have good general idea of how to use Flash. If you can build on this you could get really good at this! Trust me, practise makes perfect! Try to work on makeing the animation slightly smoother and working on your drawing skills!

This is good, but I can't wait to see you improve on your later works!

Score: 6

"Bad points, but overall a good submission"

by: One-Dollar

date: February 24, 2007

There was quite a lot of good and bad with this. The drawings were pretty average, but still captured the Final Fantasy style. The animation fairly bad in places (the use of stretching pictures, the sudden appearance of the bad guy's minions etc.), yet the fight scenes were varied and exciting. The music was badly chopped together, yet added a brilliant atmosphere to the piece.

Overall I have to say your presentation needs a lot of work, but despite this, the flash was still very entertaining and you've obviously put a lot of time into it. I really enjoyed it, it was a lot better than the majority of Newgrounds submissions. Please practise your art and sound editing and you can make top quality submissions in the future