YAY!

Hey Phantom. Just posting to say HURRY UP AND MAKE THE REST OF THEM! I'm writing a few new scripts right now. Remember to stick my name in the credits. Doesn't matter for this one cos you made it all but remember for the others. To all those other people who reviewed, yes I am the script writer, but I didn't write this one. We hope to make a series, we already have two other characters, and both look almost as weird as Glup.

Everything in this reveiw is subject to change. Except the part about the elephant.

an animator's piece

m. i see you stanidng in that corner.

showing that smile at me

i see you look at that chicka

smilin at her

and i say

hey baby

whats got you down

is it the life you live

the smile thats down?

because give it a day

she'll cheer up

and you know how it'll be

when everyones in love

Retarded

Is this the best you could come up with?

Maybe

you could´ve made the story (if there was one) a bit longer.That´s a great start t a series you could make.All you need is some more ideas.

Different.

Ehm... yes. I think that sums it up. Different. Very. Yes. Ahem.

(PS. A small tip - put a little alpha effect on them motion blurred wings when... IT flies - looks better)