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This is amazing, good luck with it.

As an artist and story teller who is writing her own story, I completely understand why you have not finished Adeshra. I read the summary of the story, and it is a very unique and interesting concept. The character design is very good, the music is wonderful Overall I love the whole concept of Adeshra. It also sort of inspired me to continue on my own story that I have been working on for about 6 years now. I wish you all the best with this project and I hope to see more of your work in your future should you choose to continue it. You really should, it's amazing.

By the way do you have the story on your website? If you do I would love to read it.

~KageSakura

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I'm not really that into games like these. Where you pick clothes out for the people. I think it's a waste of time. I decided to check it out though, and read the story.
The story was really interesting. You gave a lot of detail, but didn't give too many spoilers. I look forward to future games/flash of Adeshra.
I also liked the clothing and music. The clothing were all really nice and stylish ;D They just seem so cool and in a different time period. Which is good! They were really interesting and seemed Egyptian/African, in my opinion. Hehe.
I liked the music for the 'Main Menu' and 'Character Gallery'/'About Adeshra'. They both seemed so fitting. The music for the main menu seemed distant and mysterious. It seems to match [eeer...the character's] face. For the Character Gallery and About Adeshra, the music seemed ancient-like. Quite subtle and nice. Like it was really old and looking back on history. Which fits :] Nice placement. Not sure if you know what I'm talking about, but oh well. xD
The music for the actual game itself seemed African like to me. :] Not exactly African, but quite Lion King like. :3 And like I said before, the clothing reminds me of Africa. So to me, also fitting. :]

Well I better stop before I ramble on and on. Which I seem to have done quite a bit compared to other comments. I say, Great Job! Keep up the good work! I hope I haven't offended you in any way >>

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This was great! I loved the story and the clothing choice.

Magnificent!

Wow!Thats an amazing game i love the music that goes with it.The graphics are great i play this game everyday i like the kinda story too al about Adeshra its amazing nice art skills not even i could make such a great kinda story ^^ Keep up the good work!

Your story line sounds so good

I would absolutly love to one day read it or see it in a movie. If you ever made it into a book series I would probably buy them all. It sounds soooooo interesting. Hope you can work out what you need to do with that, dont keep it too yourself for too long.