Score: 8
"Lol"
date: December 7, 2009
I think I really like these weekly shorts :p I find them more amusing than your normal work actually.
The beginning was already quite funny. With Afro breaking into Bahamuts house using an explosive. How very subtle xD Afro wouldn't do well as a burglar I guess. I also wonder how Bahamut could not have heard that. I guess a dragon must be very hard to wake up. Then when Afro opened the door of Bahamut's room, the door knob seemed to be on the wrong side of the door. It didn't seem to be done intentionally, or was it?
After that I couldn't really hear what music Afro was uploading to Bahamut's MP3. Was it the Spice Girls again? I suppose it was if Bahamut got so angry.
Anyway, this still didn't explain why Bahamut couldn't remember Afro in the flash before. Although there was a reference, but it was still left in the dark. And this flash does suggest that there was indeed something going on between you and Afro. Is there any explanation or was it just a random joke?
Overall 8 out of 10, 4 out of 5. Like I said I really like these weekly shorts so far. Too bad you gave up on them at some point.
~Auz
December 7, 2009
Author's Response:
It was the YMCA. Also, yeah there was a reference to the Valentine's Day flash but it wasn't explained that well. Meh.
