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Anther emake of my DeathArena flash. This time, added commentaary, kind of story and bios of blobs.
ALSO, can someone make me an ICON? I can't find a good screenshot.
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Shows some effort
Notbad, could use some more effort in the audio, and maybe a tad long aswell abit more detail all around, for the mostpart it was good, and i liked it, just work on those few things though.
Abit more effort needed.
fun to watch, though a bit short
The characters may be just blobs, but at least they've got a fair sense of squash and stretch.
The arenas are a bit sloppy, but that's not too terrible. Just something to work on to further improve it.
What I reckon would really help take it to another level and not be too hard is if the commentary was vocalised. If you've got a good voice, shout it all into a mic. Or get someone from the VoiceActingClub to do it, like a proper presenter. That'd be cool.
What made this though, is the idea. It's been done before, but I suppose it's something with serious lasting appeal.
Anyway, it was fun to watch, though a bit short.
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10 for style
This is actually quite a good idea. Watching people contest for money, risking their lives... You could really make something good out of this.
The music was also very well chosen, alot of firm solid tracks that suited this style of animation.
The only problem would be the animation, it was far to simplistic, the visuals were decent. But I think, with this idea... and some time you could really make something great.
Best of luck with future works.
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The best part was definitely the music. You had a lot of cool songs in this movie and changed them often, which made things less boring. The movie wasn't too bad, I like the concept of it at least.
I don't really like how quickly this moves. Also, it would be better if everyone didn't die within five seconds, that was kind of lame. Work on slowing things down, and eventually doing some more animating, perhaps with a little more than just circles.
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Needs working on
Sorry my friend, but I can't vote this up more, no matter what I think of you.
You've managed to prove you can deal with certain aspects of flash - movement and sound (music) in particular, although the whole thing together looks poor.
What you need is a voice soundtrack for starters and more than just coloured blobs representing the main characters. To make your background drawing more detailed, try zooming out and applying a small brush. It takes a lot longer, I know, but the results are worth it.
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