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Very short film starring "El Cagado" - Supermarket Luchadore. This is his debut fight against seasoned veteran Esmay Tilliard. Expect this one to go the distance.
PS - Probably best with headphones, mostly sort of ambient sound.
that was a very cool animation. this one definitely had a nice, entertaining and original idea to it.... definitely fun to watch. some good drawings in this one, nice audio, quite amusing and it offered some pretty nice entertainment.
good work on this one.
Good but flawed
The Good: Nice art style, brilliant idea, above-par animation.
The Bad: No sense of timing, movie over-long
First off - excellent idea, and it has great scope. The NG logo blowing away at the start was really well done. The art style suits the subject matter well, and is nice to look at to boot.
But - and this is a real shame - your sense of timing is off. It took about 4 times as long as it should to get to the actual movie, and the setup for the final gag (the woman getting schooled) was about twice as long as it should have been. By the end it felt as though you were trying to stretch what should have been a one-minute movie into three or four minutes, and it suffers because of it.
It's a fine balance to strike to be sure, but it really does make all the difference; this movie could have felt really polished if not for all the filler.
Still, I wish you luck with this series and hope that the next one will be a little tighter - it has great potential.
Cheers for the constructive criticism. By way of explanation, I was kinda trying to build a sense of 'atmosphere', and the punchline was kinda meant to be the fact that it took so long to get to the punchline...Guess I screwed that one up! lol. Anyhoo, I'm new to Flash so it's always good to get non-abusive feedback ;-)
This is priceless.
One of those rare submissions that makes all of the flash sewage I waded through to get here seem a small price to pay. Thanks for the laughs and if possible could you tell me where I can get some Wheet Fux Ricey Bites?
Good but music synchronisation problems.
Fantstic style and artwork, reminds me of firth but not soo much that your style isn't original.
small problem with sound synchronisation, first scene after preloader where we are allowed play control, visuals couldn't keep up with audio.
actual animation played perfectly. very well done, could do with a bit more length.
Very original graphics and style, great sound. Keep it up!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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