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Feb 10, 2007 | 4:20 PM EST
  • Daily 4th Place February 11, 2007

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In the year 2105, the world is in a desolate state. A madman has recently come to power in the US, and has allowed for anyone to sell their babies into the military for ten thousand dollars.

-Finally, the second chapter is out! The action is in the second half of the Flash, so be sure to watch it all the way through! There were a few problems along the way, but thankfully, it is complete. It isn't absolutely necessary that you watch Chapter one, but it will help you learn a bit more about the characters. The third chapter will include more information about the base itself, and the situation the teens are in. Look for it soon!

Special thanks to the voice actors and the VAC!

Dominic/Prodigy - NinjaMatt
Trey - Willknavison [Credited as Nick Patrella]
Cybil - Rina-Chan

Reviews


kamekeisenkamekeisen

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

This pains me...

I am impressed, and disturbed by this at the same time. Not only have you used a million story cliches with no original twist as of yet... but the combat was completely ripped off from what I'd assume is Naruto. Not to mention the fact that what you called a corporal level technique... seemed to be something a 3rd grade could do... and why would they only be able to use a skill 4 times? Its not like they're using chakra or something.


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Bubbowrap responds:

Please don't remind me of my shame.

Thank you. <3


thrilldealerthrilldealer

Rated 3 / 5 stars

erm...again...

characters are still gay, screeplay is still sloppy and low quality, good potential for a story, but you're taking it downhill. All of it so far is pretty much cliche.

Anyways, good practive I suppose so I wish you luck.



NotveryoriginalNotveryoriginal

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Getting better

Woow great improvment but sill you could still try to improve some graphics, and maybe more interactivity with they're sourroundin the envoirement they're in like breaking walls grab a weapon thing like that.
Keep up the good work!



LiliumLilium

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Improving

I definitely liked this episoe more. Yay, action! The dialogue is a bit choppy when he's talking to himself, but beyond there it's pretty good. Some of the art definitely has room for improvement, but the acting was good, and the animation still fluid.


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sven647sven647

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Eh...

It was ok kind of a typical anime if you ask me i got bored.