Score: 6
"Not too shabby, Marc-san."
date: February 13, 2007
Well, this wasn't bad at all. It was nothing new, though. The animations in this film were pretty smooth, but I felt it was too influenced by anime. With all the stuff on newgrounds right now, I can't help but want something new. Perhaps try combining anime-esque elements with something completely new. Your lead character was implemented to be a total B.A.M.F., but with that goofy dragonbrawl z haircut, I couldn't help but think he was, well...a douchebag. The fight scenes were okay, again nothing too new here. Sound was drab, decent music with badly acted vocals. Overall, it was okay to watch. I see so much potential in your work that is wasted on unoriginal and cliche things. I will keep my eye on your work, sir.
Author's Response:
heh, thanks for the advice. yea, i know i made his hair pretty fucking crazy. ill make sure to tone it down a bit and make everything a lot better in ep2. you guys wont be dissappointed.