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^^Good Points^^
Kind of cool to see the drawings progress in here. Definitely not as good as the other one of these you did. Though I did like the NG tank drawing, that was cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, this one is not nearly as good as the other experimental movie you made like this one. The drawings in this one are less interesting and are more free-hand, which doesn't really look good to me.

Ehm

Well I didn't like this experiment as much as the other one, it's a bit crappily drawn, without any color or detail what-so-ever. The concept is nice though, but the graphics could use some improvement. Keep workin on it!

-cd-

cool

you are the worst drawer ever!................................
......jest kidding XD AWSOME DUDE XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hmm i like it

nicely done!

Kl

Needs to be longer and with music- peaceful type