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This is my first go at mixing FBF with tweens, enjoy!
bird birds valantine valantines fly FBF tween
good animation and cool song . I like it
By far your best
This animation was very nice, i really enjoyed watching it, definatly deserves a score of 3.5. The animation could do with polishing up in places but overall it was great. Keep up the good work.
The music suited it and i liked the theme
Oh cool, a 3.5 would be nice... Anyway good review, thanks.
You did a nice job on this but there is room for improvement. The graphics were interesting to watch but if you would try to draw the birds less "crooked", and more smoother, they would look much better. I understand the trees and the landscape were drawn in the form of a crooked state, which truly shows your style. The style was great. I like the drawings of the trees and of the landscape. You did a great job on that. The music fitted the animation very nicely and there aren't any flaws with it. It would have been better though if you would have added some kind of sound effects. For example, you could have added a sound effect that would convey birds chirping, etc. There also wasn't a plot of some kind, and if there was, sorry if I missed it. Overall, you did a nice job on this submission, just try to polish up more you characters, not the backgrounds, becuase they look great but the characters so that they would look more smoother and not in the state of a person who drew them very quickly, work more on length, and add sound effects. Keep working and spiffen up you animation skills and I hope to see more from you. Good luck on your future submissions.
Summary Points: Good graphics, try to polish up your characters, Very Nice Style, although there wasn't a plot to go with, Great Music but there was a lack of sound effects, quite short but well animated.
What a review! I will be refuring back to this everytime a start a new peice of work, Its easy to understand your points, thanks alot!
Nice job man.
I enjoyed it, you are a good animator and drawer.
wers the fight?
its just two birds flying down, not a fight, not interresting. any1 can draw like that, but it was not the worst eva... if i was to offa help, i would suggest longer, and get a better plot line
Fair enough, but not everything needs a fight.
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