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Okay, its been a while.
i would like a feedback on this movie, how can i make this movie better. im already working on the sounds.
the movie is about 1 minute long, and sorry for drawing link so bad, i promise to make him lock better in the full version of the movie.
its good but try 2 find a way to make him adult link, and also add sound plz
this would be so much better if u updated it with sounds then it would be the greatest film on newgrounds
try to use sounds next time
Aside from not having sound, i actually watched the entire flash with no complaints. The ending though did need a little work (a crash into the drawbridge was seen a mile away).
Try like a grab & get him stuck as they draw the brige up.. Maybe a little more funnier too me... i think.
I did like that band of chickens though.. helped the flash alot.
ill absolutely use ur suggestion about link getting stuck in the bridge.
sounds very funny to me ;)
thx for the review
You asked so I'm giving ^^'
Okay you wanted some feedback I shall give. You did say in the fflash that you may go back and rewrok some things...may I sugest better graphics? you graphics were just fine but ive seen alot of scetched/drawn on graphics...
Sound is much needed yes ^^' gives it more of the humor.
In truth the guard looked like it was the only one you really put some work into...
I'm sorry if im being a bit harsh.....I have to be. I'm hoping to encourgae you to do better. But I would like to see the full movie :D
thx for the feedback, ill use ur suggestions.
(it took about 10 sec to draw the guard)
ill put much, much more effort in the full movie.
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