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Submitted: 01/29/2007 | 11:39AM EST

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Current Score: 2.46 / 5.00

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It's really short... I did a last minute thing from sat and finished this morning... It's a AID/HIV awareness animation for a beauty pagent that I'm entering.. and this is my talent entry... it's due today so.. oh boy lol.. I know I cheated a little with the animation, but I was pressed for time.... at least it gets the point across...

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Average Score: 5.2 / 10

Score: 7
IceDragon64

"Very good"

date: January 29, 2007

+Good Art
+Good sound
+Good voice
+good message

I wouldn't change it

Do more flash!

Best of luck in the pagent,
Ice

Author's Response:

;.; You're awesome, thanks!

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Score: 10
electricballroom

"beauty pagent"

date: January 29, 2007

heyy, exactly how beautiful r u hunny?

Author's Response:

http://s6.photobucket.com/alb ums/y225/fwee5/Scary%20Lust/

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Score: 4
StupidMonkeysTheatre

"Decent effort"

date: January 29, 2007

What you had was good, but it could have been so much more. But you did say there was a time constraint. However, with the amount of content in this movie, did it really get the point across? If this is to get people involved in HIV/AIDS awareness, it doesn't say anything about HOW to get involved.

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Score: 3
cdn-trainee

"Good start but..."

date: January 29, 2007

You mentioned in the notes that you were pressed for time when you made this. And...it shows. A LOT. But, I think you were on the right track if you're using this as your talent for a beauty pagent (which I've never heard of a contestant doing--nice to see someone doing something different, KUDOS!) The voice that you used sounded like a six year old's, which made it hard to hear and understand. I liked the opening (person running, drawn like a rough sketch rather than all polished) as well as the message. It'll have to take quite a bit of polishing, but it's not like you're starting from square one. Good luck!

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Score: 2
xkrazykanukx

"Talent?"

date: January 29, 2007

Well It is a message that needs to get across, but when you have a high pitched annoying squeak in the backround, you can't really focus on it...

Author's Response:

lol sorry, that would have been me playing with my voice. I wanted a child's voice and I did lower it a little, but I guess not enough. Thanks

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