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Yawn

Same stuff getting real old now

Still Need Improvement...

The size he was to the size he was after he fell did not match,I know you said your computer was messed up but the size when he fell didn't match, it didn't show any sudden power rushing or flowing through the Eliminator, and most of the action was occurring on one side (Uneven number of action for both sides), the timing of the Eliminator climbing back up was too fast,when Jesus came out of nowhere there wasn't any scene or anything to get the person who watching this to really recognize that Jesus revived the Eliminator,Zombies or Humans can't revive people (from where the zombie bit the person and it said: OMG RESURRECT),Also I noticed that when the Eliminator climbed back up, when the Eliminator was holding the Gang Leader it didn't like he killed him just cause he lost more health doesn't mean that he can just get enough health to squeeze somebody enough to split them in half, and last but not least I saw from the beginning the Eliminator looked not 100% (there was a blood patch on the Eliminator's cheek),there was no scene showing that he got damaged before the Eliminator was on a kill rampage(If you start at a game you always start at 100% unless there was a scene showing the viewer to reconize that the Eliminator got damaged before going on the kill rampage to kill the Gang Leader.
But Good Effort.

sucked

the way the gangleader died was stupid

no

tisk- tisk, please don't do this again. we get enough of this crap from kirnkles himself, and his is alot better obviously. There is no need to try and rip him off credit given or not. just don't do it anymore and go make your own flash.

Graphics 0 - these wern't your own graphics
Style 0 - this wasn't your own style
Sound 3 - at least you didnt rip this off of Krinkles
Violence 5 - deaths were lame the enemys were the most retarded ememys I've ever seen.
Interavctivity 0 - there was a play button but i dont think it counts
Humor 2 - The 'Launch Gravy' part was kinda funny though.

not so good.

Not bad, but bot good either. you have mutch to improve on .
if you are making a madness movie, make it something special.
The slaugthering are just like in krinkels movies, and we already
got his movies to watch if we want to see madness. It is just a waste of time making this movie, if you not really take time on making it. come up with some new characters and painting style,
maybe that could turn up to really good, becuase you got some skills with flash. my biggest advise, practise.

Good luck with your later animations.