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hello i dont know y i am submitting this animation but it is for my upcoming animation school dayz i have no clue y i made the characters like this enjoi
One Word: HA!
good this is gabe this is gonna be the name of the thinggy or whatever when i get computer
This made me chuckle ever so slightly at the end.
'You' could have been drawn and animated a bit better. I just feel that showing you fully coloured, maybe in a director's chair or at a PC or whatever, would have worked better.
I liked the verbal exchange between the 2 simple shapes and am kinda looking forward to this.
Could be good.
Your characters are nothing special but not bad.
The graphics are decent.
The humor so far is pretty good, random though it is 9be careful, it's a fine line between funny random and stupid random).
I would complain about it being too short if this wasn't a trailer, but it was fine, though we could always use a little more...
All in all it was ok, I look forward to the finnished product, good luck :)
Graphics- Pretty good.
Style- Same old, same old
Sound- Ok, I guess
Violence- You just HAD to make him cry, didnt you?
Interactivity- oohh, a play button!
Humor- lol, he cried
Overall- Not bad, but needs improvement.
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