i liked it but maybe u ould have more places to go... and maybe a few characters to talk to... but over all nice game = )

The game is pretty easy. Just get the hammer, smash the locker, and go through the door. Make the text more noticable, becuase it's hard to see. Maybe a light green, rather a dark green. Overall, not great but not bad, it's good.

the text was too dark. i actually had to move myself around to read the words. it'd be nice if next time you use a light colored text over a dark background--it's less strain on peoples' eyes. these point and click adventures aren't all that appealing anymore, but it does bring back memories of those interactive story books we had at school when i was younger.

you might want to add in more stuff that happens when you click on something because in here, there wasn't much to do. but it's a good start. the graphics were good too, a bit on the simple side, but it works for the story, i guess.

keep on the work, you'll only get better from here.

Short was an acurate statement. The graphics and audio were really good. The green text was kind of hard to read on the dark background.

Some of the text was awfully low contrast and hard to see.

I thought some hitboxes were a bit small - I tried clicking the boxes, but it took the tab cheat (to see the invisible buttons) to work out where I had to click.

Not really any puzzles or anything. Just all a bit too short and straightforward.

The ending was a bit vicious for my liking, though others may be amused.

I did like the graphics and the music fitted the mood well.

Overall though, I didn't enjoy it much.