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A story of a hampster whos love for its owner pays the ultimate price
The music itself , as in the lyrics was ok. It was a ok flash but maybe some points to improve on:
. Graphix wherent that great, not bad but not great
. Song hurts my ears you could have improved on that maybe a bit more tempo in it
The story itself was kinda funny and sad at the same time. I was going aaaaaa when he was in the sun and laught with the experimenting kids. It wasnt bad but realy some points to improve on. Keep on working to improve
Thanks for the review, I'll work harder on my next one. Im pretty bad at keeping tempo.
Great job on this. I would not change anything, the gra[hics matched the music and tone of the movie. Hope you do more of these.
I'm really happy you enjoyed this movie. Maybe I'll start making these kind of cartoons now. Thanks for Reviewing.
i liked it a lot. It was a pretty good song and i liked how some was black and white and some was colored.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked how I colored some parts and left the others black and white. Was just trying to make the feeling match the song.
good job. this is a good flash. a lot better then some of the stuff that makes it through the portal. anyways 5/5 for you.
I wouldn't know if this was going get through the portal, due to the way I animate. Thanks for voting!
Not bad, not bad.
Graphics were TERRIBLE, but the song made up for that. Work on your graphical ability, and you've got yourself a winner!
Just one question though. If it's "been awhile since I've made one of these." Then how can it be your first music video? O_o
Thanks for the review, haha yeah your right. I sound retarded. I meant to say I haven't animated for long time and this would be my first "Music Video". I've never made up my own song and created a short. I usually make long comedy cartoons.
the sequel u didnt ask for is finally here!
Lucy and Ben get fingered by a hobo in an alleyway. Wait...
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