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Jan 11, 2007 | 2:35 PM EST

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I know its very short... But I feel that short stories bring stronger points and that was my misson with this flash... i wanted a strong message but not so long that leaves nothing for your imagination. I know because it is so short it will prob. pass the portal with out too much notice. But I really hope people do watch this... I put alot of effort into it... anyways Thanks always!! And I LOVE reading your comments!! So Please Comment!! Thanks for your time!
-Ashy

Reviews


talkingtrouserstalkingtrousers

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

This was a darker sort of your work..

It really wasnt in my taste, The music, is classic.

However the video itself didnt impress me much, rather than your other work, perhaps it was because greater detail would have been needed in the mans..er...details. His face for example, and the mouthing looked strange to me.

David firth, is the masterof this dark stuff, but to be honest, This was more just depressing. The blood and pill-popping, and whole suicide element was strange, but rather than enthralling me it kind of repelled.

Do some mad tunes next.
An' i'll buy you such an icecream.



LostsideLostside

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Cool Photo Effects

I really liked the way you did the photographs. Plus, Pink Floyd is almost always a good choice.

My only real suggestion would be: When a character is interacting with something, like the dude is when he's running his fingers through his hair, I think it helps for there to be some sort of visual clue that the interaction is taking place. You know, like some of the hair would overlap the fingers, or they would move to track over the curve of the top of the head, or something. It's a minor point, I guess, but it is something I noticed.



PeirceWproductionsPeirceWproductions

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good bye!

hee hee, he died. mans, what pills was he takin? there was blood comin from his ears or nose or whatever. Hmm, what else can I say about this flash? Well, I guess its fun to watch people commit suicide. cause dat was entertaining to watch. He kind of had grayish hair so I guess it was his time to go. There should be a sequel when he comes back as a crab and feasts upon children.


cheshirecat1582 responds:

crab? lol Humm... thats interesting... lol thanks for your review!!


Master-RachMaster-Rach

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Not to...

be offensive, but what was that?

Short movies let out stronger points, you said... What was the point? For emotional thirty year olds to commit suicide? Or not to?

Either way, we don't need crappy 10 second animations on NG. NG is already stuffed full of crap, and this just overfilled the bag.
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On graphics, a 6 because it lacked an original style, and was pretty simple tweening. On style, a 0. Again; No point. On sound, a 2. That vocal wasn't really high quality, and the animation would of been slightly better without that tune setting the plot (Amazingly). Violence, Interavtivity, and Humor are 0 because it lacked all of them. Pill popping idiots emos are not humorous, and the violence there was none.
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Second summary:

The play button was the best part of this crap. Use it in other movies, ones that dont suck ass.
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With tons of love and tons of fuck you, Master-Rach,
PEACE OUT, YA'LL! *rockets into space*



JPfan87JPfan87

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow

I was touched by it very much, I loved all of the detail and the effort put into it. Pink Floyd is a great choice of music for this kind of thing. Great job overall. Keep up the good work. Seriously.


cheshirecat1582 responds:

Thank you so much!! I dont know if i will be submitting anything for a while... I just submitted one last night.. but I have been busy with school and everything... And im out of ideas... lol but anyways Thank you so much for the 10!!! Every little bit helps!!