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Here's the first short in the Edible Castle series. I hope you all enjoy it.
Written & voiced by Andy Dennis.
Animated by Will Arbuckle.
This was quite funny. The artwork and animation are quite superb. The voice acting is masterful, very funny and quite realistic for a, well let's be honest top notch cartoon. The sound effects are also masterful since you did them yourselves very well I might add. The story is a bit short, but I can let it slide since it's mainly an introduction. All in all You did a great job easing us into this series and I hope they just keep getting better and better.
This flash made me chuckle, but it could have made me laugh with some better jokes. Sorry, but jokes based purely on stupidity got old a while ago.
Also, you should have added a big twist. A punchline if you will, something that just makes me go "woah, what the fuck!". Like maybe a landmine goes off even though their in the middle ages or something.
Work on the art as well, maybe that was what you were going for. But I, personally, like to watch flashes where the author puts a lot of effort into the art aspect.
Everything else was just average, really nothing better. I've yet to check out the other episodes in this series. Maybe they will be better, but the fate of this flash is sealed.
3/5 and 7/10
your mom smells like cheese
Awww it wasn't that bad
Don't listen to those bad reviewers! I'm on your side! I got a laugh outta those to fighting. You just keep up the great work dude! PS this will getta 5!
no worries, the good reviews definitely outweigh the bad ones.
The shorter it gets, the better it is. Great way of introducing characters, and the main subject of your next shorts.
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