Score: 5

"Umm Ok.."

by: Killer4oo

date: December 2, 2007

I Will Give You A Five Cuz Its Very Nice. But You Copyed It Fromsomeone Else And His Is Better So Ill Give U A Five.

Score: 6

"K"

by: milinko959

date: May 30, 2007

^^Good Points^^
I think you did a good job on this. The storyline was rather random, and seemed more experimental, but it was still pretty interesting and funny to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could definitely use some background music or something. The long silences are awkward. Also, work on keeping the drawings consistent. You seemed to draw them, then smooth them out.

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Score: 4

"A few changes I'd make, but good"

by: Coop83

date: May 26, 2007

Well, this is a decent little flash. There are a few simple points I'd like to make about this flash before I go any further:

- The margin (red line) of a page should slide off to the left of screen when your character walks to the right.
- When recording sound, play it back to yourself and if there's too much static (making a sound like you're talking through a sheet of paper), put the mic further from your mouth when you record.

Those two problems are very simple things to fix and when you do, this flash is looking at being one of your best yet. Considering the file size is so small, you can make this into a great product within a very short amount of time, I'd wager

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Score: 7

"Well, ok..."

by: Glunnator

date: May 1, 2007

Total of 7 because it was a good effort.
Humor is 0 because it was all mixes of Pencilmation 1 & 2 and... watsitcalled... paper wars?
Stick fighting pencil - Pencilmation
main story about fight dragon girl stolen etc - Paper wars(?)
beating the superstick - Pencilmation 2

And it might be an idea to practise a bit more with frame by frame animation, because it was al very choppy and the sticks just didn't seem alive. The way super stick landed was also a bit..... Euughhhh o.O''

Good luck with your next work!

Score: 5

"Man..."

by: Warrickneff

date: January 6, 2007

That girl was RANK.

The animation seemed a bit slow and choppy, it took a long time to get going. Not too many of the ideas were original.

Still, it was fairly well done seeing as how it at least had sound and a fair length to it.