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FAULT: my computer's bein spaz (gay arsehole) but im getting the problem fixed
EDIT: own replay button, hiperlink (should) work(s) and you can now skip to the fight so u don't have to wait. PLUS listen to the music for the next "big fight" animation.
If you think i could do beter, review it and i will see to that. Also questions as well if u have them.
I cant describe how bad this is.
Style: resubmitted movie(i blammed it first time) And suck story.
Sound: worst voice acting ever.
Violence: not good.
Interactivity: not good.
Humor: kill me.
Overall: I wrote a review for this like 2 months ago, and you said that i should make my own flash movie so you could get a good laugh. Well, i have some flash in the works, so...
Then the review was deleted. But ive got to review it again, it was just so bad.
Even just giving a tip would be nice, but noobs like you are annoying
One thing I noticed you did was try to put some expression on the face, which I found to add a tad bit of humor into this and made it more interesting.
This really needs some work, I'm really surprised it even passed judgment. You use stick figures, and not the good kind with thick arms and great animations. You mainly just animated on large scale, and didn't animated arms and legs really at all, which is really primitive. You need to add some backgrounds to make things more interesting as well. This was a really empty movie.
i know madrick1 told me to make it longer which i did slitly plus this is my third animation
perhaps the folowing tips will help?
try thickening the lines of the body to about half the thickness of the body
listen to your own audio or let somone else listen to it before using it and if you dont think you can make it better in quality then try using text or some other way of comunication instead of audio
practice practice practice and then practice again to try and perfect your grapchics and perhaps even your audio
thanks for the big tip plus my computer is now programed to make the music MP3 so the song is perfect thoughout cool eh?
Don't give up
Man, that wasn't that good.
I mean, graphics are ugly, there's no story, nothing realy interresting...
But don't give up and keep trying, maybe one day you'll be the next xiaoxiao, why not?
thanks, but dont put it in a harmful way next time
not bad :)
I liked it sweet music nice violence work on your graphics even though its a stick animation flash
wow thanks! its just stick flash is easy
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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