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This was good.
I enjoyed this flash, but the animation was a little hard to follow. I think you cut some corners. Work on that and the next will be even better. 5/5
Overall i suppose its a nice flash. BUT it was very very cliche. Its not that its done in an anime type style or anything its just that everything you did has been done before. EX: The poses struck, Link charging saying "why", and the deku dieing at the end and telling them crap before he dies. You are talented in animation but your imagination needs work.
Pretty sweet flash one of the better ones i have seen in awile nice job!
Really appealing style, indeed. The animations felt so life-like and not dead, though the movement on the characters could be choppy at times, but that did not lower the entertainment at all. The way you used the sfx and music fitted really well, but voice acting were not really the best, however acceptable. Story flowed pretty well too, but sometimes a bit awkward. It was a pleasure for my eyes to see a movie like this on the portal, as it's a while ago I saw an entry with true quality. Keep on animating, my dear fellow.
it could use some fixes, but overwell well done..
your spelling in some places was messed up...
and at some parts you couldn't really tell who was talking without reading the subtitles and at some places the noise got more quiet then it shouldve been...
do you have a friend or anything??
cause i advise you to make these and then have a friend watch them before submitting so you have a better chance of fixing the mistakes before they enter the portal that way you haVE a better chance of passing.. and if you were not to pass the people would complain about spelling mistakes and sound problems and then later blam you automaticly for no reason for resubmitting..
so yeah check up on a friend to test it out for little mistakes.
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