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This is a really short flash, i decided to submit it. it might be so short it doesnt pass judgement, i was thinking abou making it really long with all shorts of thing happening, let me know if i should make one.
Nothing spectacular, but it made me smile.
Not too bad. It got a smile out of me. Maybe you should make a longer version :) You definitely have some good ideas. You should work with them a bit more.
I watched the whole thing. That's good.
Graphics - Despite your account's record of protected flash movies, the animation in this one wasn't too stunning. It looks almost like you used Macromedia's ball experiment and added a guy and a car in with it, both quickly drawn.
Style - The plot is short and simple, but at least its not a one-message joke like some other flashes I've seen.
Sound - Everything came through clearly and made sense to the timings, although they didn't really go anywhere because of the short film.
Violence - Only a 1 because the crash was off-screen. Not necessarily bad, but certainly PG.
Interactivity - NA
Humor - Classic case of, "Don't lose your head about it."
Overall - Interesting little film, despite its slow-paced animation and low graphical quality. If you had put more time into it, I'm sure you could have done alot more with this.
Animation was good... Lots of potential!! I gave you a 5 only cuz i dont want this movie to get blamed because its violent only with out the blood and knifes and stuff... and you know everyone laughs at a classic joke with a car hitting a man... what could be funnier? I ask you!! Oh well maybe a bus... and then show the bus drivers view... That could be funnier... maybe with a circus clown juggling rolls by on a unicycle and picks up the ball and starts juggling with that too... untill a lion eats him in one gulp burping out the ball where a seal picks it up and starts bouncing it on his nose.... WOW I could just keep going on and on... Anyways Great job! Keep up the GREAT work... Cant wait to see more!
Did you actually think about this?
While I did see some potential for some nice work, this really just did not seem thought out very much. Remember, never make something just for the sake of making it, put meaning into it.
That was short. I blammed it in hopes that it would be replaced by a better, longer version of it. so im saying im looking forward to the longer one!
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