Score: 4

"it was alrite"

by: Gokufan111

date: November 16, 2008

hi wolfinator-x

i liked it but i didn't think it would be a thing to do all the time and there has to be imporvment and thats y im giving this vid 4/10. :-) ;-)

Score: 6

"HAHA"

by: Gothpunker

date: February 26, 2008

Not a great tutorial but for lightsabers... Make sure arnold judus rimmer doesn't appear in your battles.... that was great! LONG LIVE RED DWARF

Score: 3

"K"

by: milinko959

date: May 30, 2007

^^Good Points^^
I suppose you have some good techniques in here. I like how all of the AS is selectable for easy moving to Flash.

^^Needs Improving^^
The thing that really annoyed me was the robotic voice over. There is really no need for it, as most people can simply read the text, and I don't know anyone who wouldn't want to read it faster than that robot voice. You should either get rid of it completely, or make it stop when moving from frame to frame, so that the clips don't overlap.

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Score: 5

"Ehh..."

by: Nav

date: May 30, 2007

First off, are these really advanced topics? They seem like "bitmap" and "miscellaneous" rather than advanced.

The bitmap tracing was imperfect. It left a white line around the character. I also didn't like the lightsaber. It looked too fat. How about making it come to a point, like real lightsabers do? Also, the lightsaber trails were bad. They should have been fading, rather than solid.

The computer voice was hell. I didn't want to wait until the voice was done to explore the flash. It just kept talking! It was very annoying! You should have used a different method of sound.

It wasn't funny, so I can't give a score.

Overall, it was OK. It was not great and didn't teach me too many new things. Keep trying harder.

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Score: 3

"Bitmap tracing needs work."

by: Coop83

date: May 26, 2007

I feel a bit harsh when I say this, but you really need to practice more before you tell other people how to do it. I know that I've never used flash programs before in my life, but I have used photoshop. Zooming into the image will give you greater control over the pencil 'tip' and will produce a better image.

I'm not sure about the computer voice, especially if you have to wait for it to finish speaking before you can move on, otherwise you end up with 2+ voice over tracks talking simeltaneously, which sounds a real mess.

Most of the tutorial is good though, so keep up the good work.

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