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Breaking Benjamin (Buy!)


Submitted: 12/28/2006 | 10:10AM EST

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Current Score: 3.63 / 5.00

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I'm sorry that it seems unfinished. I didn't complete the whole song. But if it wasnt for Metalix, I wouldn't have finished even a bit of it at all. So thanks to him, you are seeing this in the portal.

In other words... I wanted to get this ready for October, but I stopped at September, I started this at late August.

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Average Score: 7.3 / 10

Score: 10
Fatal

"Niice your parts for my collab better be this hawt"

by: Fatal
date: January 4, 2007

lol, nice peice of work their man! good job

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Score: 5
halford

"man this a good animation"

date: December 28, 2006

your animation is good, but have one problem
lyrics is gone !!

you have a future

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Score: 5
BritishMoose

"Meh"

date: December 28, 2006

Graphics: The opening shot with the leaves made me expect more. Sadly I was dissapointed. If I can refer to the opening shot as a sterling example of what you can do, then you, sir, were very lazy! Had you kept that same quality in the backgrounds throughout, I wouldn't have particularly minded the basic character design.

Style: You managed to convey atmosphere pretty well, the lip syncing was also top notch in some places. However, there was little animation of movement (although, when there was it was fine). You should try and put more effort into your fbf and use even more.

Sound: I didn't really like the song...That doesn't effect my final score.

Violence:...

Interactivity: Preloader. Play button. Replay button. Nothin more needed. Full marks.

Humour:...

In conclusion you get a fantabulous Five out of Ten, but you could definately do better. If you want to keep the basic character design, then make sure they are animated SUPERBLY - it's just sheer laziness to do a tweened 'up-down' walk-cycle with such an easily animated character. Also, make sure to keep up the quality of the backgrounds.

Well done on conveying atmosphere throughout the flash: that's the hardest part done. More animating please!

Well done.

2/5

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Score: 6
xxSHIFTxx

"Okay flash"

date: December 28, 2006

I didn't liked the music so I guess i'm not objective...

I'll just say that you should improve the rain effect, make it more random than just using the same clip

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Score: 7
CrazyChihuahua

"Pretty good overall"

date: December 28, 2006

I don't know if you just updated it or something, but the subtitles weren't glitchy for me at all. They were pretty in-sync actually.

As for the movie itself, nicely done. The lipsyncing was a bit odd at some points, but for the most part was well done. The song was great as well. It sucks that you did not complete it. I would have loved to see the whole video and hear the whole song. I also would most likely have given you a higher score if it didn't end so abruptly.

Otherwise, good stuff.

Author's Response:

Yeah, Thanks! I kinda did fix the subbies.

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