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Dec 28, 2006 | 10:10 AM EST

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I'm sorry that it seems unfinished. I didn't complete the whole song. But if it wasnt for Metalix, I wouldn't have finished even a bit of it at all. So thanks to him, you are seeing this in the portal.

In other words... I wanted to get this ready for October, but I stopped at September, I started this at late August.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

is a breaking benjamin?


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Niice your parts for my collab better be this hawt

lol, nice peice of work their man! good job


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

man this a good animation

your animation is good, but have one problem
lyrics is gone !!

you have a future


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


Graphics: The opening shot with the leaves made me expect more. Sadly I was dissapointed. If I can refer to the opening shot as a sterling example of what you can do, then you, sir, were very lazy! Had you kept that same quality in the backgrounds throughout, I wouldn't have particularly minded the basic character design.

Style: You managed to convey atmosphere pretty well, the lip syncing was also top notch in some places. However, there was little animation of movement (although, when there was it was fine). You should try and put more effort into your fbf and use even more.

Sound: I didn't really like the song...That doesn't effect my final score.


Interactivity: Preloader. Play button. Replay button. Nothin more needed. Full marks.


In conclusion you get a fantabulous Five out of Ten, but you could definately do better. If you want to keep the basic character design, then make sure they are animated SUPERBLY - it's just sheer laziness to do a tweened 'up-down' walk-cycle with such an easily animated character. Also, make sure to keep up the quality of the backgrounds.

Well done on conveying atmosphere throughout the flash: that's the hardest part done. More animating please!

Well done.


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Rated 3 / 5 stars

Okay flash

I didn't liked the music so I guess i'm not objective...

I'll just say that you should improve the rain effect, make it more random than just using the same clip

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