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This is some horrible crap I made, LOL.
Ok just stop
I'm gonna write a completely honest review for you here, not some lying bullshit. Also c'mon i know you can be better than to use alts to review your own submissions making them sound great, thats for past underdog cheaters(which is still a gay thing to do).
The flash was lacking content as it only went about in action for maybe 30 seconds. The graphics were below average with shaky lines in the stick figure animation. The sound quality is horrible though the music doesn't sound too bad. The animation was pretty smooth except for the stand still image of a stick man, i would have much rather seen an animated bit.
Pretty smooth animation~
~things to improve upon~
No still images
try to smooth the lines out more
Download the music instead of a horribly recorded by microphone clip
Yeah it sucked. Thats wy its called Pile of Crap. It meant a lot that you were honest. LOL.
I loved this flash. No lines, LOL. Yes suicide is funny.
Yes, it is great isnt it?
You said you were on crack when you did this?
The sound is a pain in my ears.
Overall very annoying and pointless.
Thats why I called it a pile of crap.
it not bad, it just needs some sound, and some replay button tooo. bye
I added sound. Thanks for the nice review.
What do you mean crap?
That was great!But would it kill you to add sound?
I added sound. K thx bai
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