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Well, finaly out, longest one yet, probably most detail, hope you guys enjoy, icon by iLegend, and all flash stuff drawn by me!
(- The Good -)
I liked your style of graphics. A bit factory dull but stylish. Reminded me of Madness. The characters were certainly original and I liked the way they had different personalities. The story is looking reasonably good so far.
The music was good, very sinister, mournful even. that was reminiscent of Metal Gear Solid. You included a preloader which is good. Also credits are always a nice sign.
(- The Bad -)
The flash was slightly humorous and the music doesn't suit this. You should pick one style and stick to it.
The credists should always be at the end of the flash. I found it quite boring enduring the text. Get to the pint straight away. Show the movie as soon as possible and then mess about with extras and all that.
(-- Overall --)
I wasn't expecting much from this flash but it's pretty decent. Well done.
(--- Review Request Club ---)
What I likWhat I liked about this was that the charactersplerese uickwnof saa good change from seeing people use sticks or Madness characters every couple on animations, good job on creating your own.
The thing that had me worried was the excitement in your flash. You could of pulled it off visually, but you didnt do it with audio. No voices, just bullet shots and the same background music. You also used the same view, if you had close ups, screams etc then it would of made it a bit more exciting.
Keep it up.
Not that great.
I don't want to waste to much time writing about everything in there but I will suggest a few things. Make the words last a little longer. The long sentences were ok but if someone says "look" it only popped up for about half a second. I would make that stick around for at least 2 or 3 seconds just to give people time to locate and read it. Also you should add a skip button on the credits. Not everyone wants to look at who made it every single time that they watch it.
Not a real fan of these...
Well, where can I start? I've never been a fan of pieces which use inanimate shapes to represent people. I know you could use some sound, especially voices in this. You've provided decent background music and sound effects for the whole movie, but voices would just top it off.
Experiment with a few other techniques - I know you can draw backgrounds and scenics, why not try and make more detailed characters and then try to move them.
If you do this then you can start coming up with flash which become better to watch
[Review Request Club]
The graphics weren't too bad. The animations are getting better each time you make one of these. The storyline was pretty interesting, I liked watching this. Also, good sound effects.
I notice that the text goes by too fast some times, and I'm afraid that I may have missed a bit of the storyline because of this.
Review Request Club
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