Score: 4
"Review Request Club"
date: January 19, 2007
Graphics:
The graphics start out decent but you way overdid the effects and layers which ended up lookin choppy and hurting my eyes. You contrasted to much with the colors which also kill my eyes. The swf's house is drawn with a line tools and colored with paint bucket which looks like crap. The swf is grainy and unedited. You should clean up how it looks in a picture editor next time.
Style:
The idea of a flash file having a face and arms that jumps into the portal to get rated and go to NG is wayyyyyy unoriginal. The Christmas theme didn't even contribute anything to the movie which says you should think up a story. The movie is cut too short and theres really no reason for it.
Sound:
The audio is okay. It fits pretty well but I would've picked some more songs.
Humor:
I don't know if you tried to be funny but if you did, it didn't work. Not only that the jokes were extremely dry and childish. You could've made more jokes about the Portal and Blamming and what not.
Improvements:
Don't go so heavy on the effects and if you do not all over the screen and not extremely opposite colors, like bright orange to dark blue. Think up an original story and make it longer.
Author's Response:
At first glance these flash animation seems to need a lot of improvement and I agree but if you put your mind into it you would probably have a different way of seeing these flash animation as a animation with no deep thought of story and with very little effort but I did work on it for a long time.
Anyway Thanks for the review and I will try to update it and improve the graphics a bit. Also I will try to use your suggestions in my upcoming flash.
