Score: 8

"Hmmm"

by: Shanus

date: April 6, 2008

Quite a strange movie, a weird topic in monologue form.

Graphically it was good, except there wasn't really much in the flash at all. Smae scene the whole way through.But things were drawn well in what they were.

The sound was good, a few recording errors, as in the pitch of your voice made the audio crack. But voice acting was quite clever, great job.

The content itself was quite humorous, but it felt a little odd because of the sheer lack of anything other then the monologue . But it ws whitty and quirky good job. Realy liked it

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Score: 6

"Well, it's Christmassy"

by: Coop83

date: April 5, 2008

I think where the whole animation suffers is that it's mostly just the guy talking, so there is little animation to do with the rest of the frame.

Not that it's a waste of time, you could certainly make one or two changes that would improve the style of the flash, like maybe adding a few flashbacks, like for example the jumping out of the window scene.

Zooming in when you draw gives you more control over the tools and will make your drawings look a lot better when you zoom back out. Since the background is seen so much in this flash, it would be useful to work on the detail of it.

Maybe have some different facial expressions for the girl, as she wouldn't stand there all passive, all the time, either.

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Score: 8

"Meh ok"

by: Sispri

date: April 4, 2008

Not the best in the plot. Kinda boring actually, it's pretty much just him speaking. But the synching and voices made up for the lack of humor or depth to the movie. The graphics were pretty good and detailed for the most part but overall it was just a one way flash. Didn't really do anything for me.

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Score: 8

"Wicked"

by: Viridis

date: April 4, 2008

For some reason i really liked this, it made me laugh quite a bit, i loved the way how she had no input in the conversation at all while he just went on and on, about him jumpin out the window lol.
Very cool dude.

Graphically it wasnt spectacular, but that didnt bother me as the character had real personality, the figures were ok, maybe add some more detail, the backrounds were ok too, more detail again. Simple figures and backrounds but still effective so it doesnt matter. The animation was pretty scarce but it didnt need much, i liked how you put the table in the front to avoid using a walking animation, im seeing this more and more nowadays.

The sound was good, very cool voice acting, very clear and easy to understand, did you do the acting yourself? Maybe you might of wanted to add some quiet christmas music in the backround to give it more atmosphere. ^_^

Overall though it was a really cool flash, id love to see more and review more like this so keep coming back and asking!!

Graphics - 7
Animtion - 7
Sound - 8

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Score: 7

"Okay"

by: Little-Rena

date: April 4, 2008

Well I don't really see too much going on except for one guy talking, it could do with a little more to it, I mean the womans face doesn't even seem to change through the whole flash which to me seems really strange, there's a guy yammering away and she doesn't change, lol.

No problems with the voice acting, that seems to be okay and very clear, so good work on that part and some of the graphics are pretty decent. Though they could do with a little work. Just really the main plot here that I think needs much improvement.

2/5

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