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Merry Christmas, Please Review, This is our Christmas special we where running late but we managed to finish, hope you like, this is a follow on to the Halloween special so the storyline comes from that, Hope you like it
Wow. What a waste of time.
This is quite possibly the worst flash you've ever done. I'm amazed it didn't get blammed. It really should have been. There was nothing amusing about it at all. The animation was really quite poor, it seemed to have been rushed. The sound was barely audible, but I can help you there - use audacity's normalizing feature. It turns up the amplitude so you can hear it. I didn't like the plot either - evil Santa? Come on, you can do better than that.
And that's coming from a friend, a'ight?
This wasn't very good...
It needs a lot of improvements and work. Some of the graphics were horrible. The Santa figure, the presents, the sack, a person's face, these were all horribly drawn. The only decent drawings were the faces of the two guys. But that's about it. I didn't find this to be funny or amusing in any way either. You need to work on your jokes and on your plots or storylines. The voices overs were pretty bad as well. Some of the voices I couldn't even understand. The voices that were quite impossible to understand were that of Santa's but the rest were quite audible. Your animation also lacked music. It would have been great if you would have included at least a Christmas theme or something related to Christmas. The only Christams related subjects or objects I found was the Santa and presents, and that's about it. Next time, work more on the graphics, work on the voice overs, try to include better sound effects and at least find suitable music for the Christmas theme of the movie, work on the storyline and jokes, and make it a little bit more longer. Do all of this stuff, and your submissions will be much better off. Good luck on your future submissions.
Summary Points: Bad Graphics, Unoriginal jokes and plot, horrible sound effects and not very good voice overs, a little bit short.
That was quite funny......................... .................
to tell the truth i only reviewed it because the page said "would you like to be the first?", nice movie anyway...
ty, we were going to throw in some more humour but we kind of an out of time, there is always next christmas, thankyou for reviewing
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