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Heres a Flash Made by Me and RaspberrySun I think we have a chance to be a great allied Force and friends

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chirpy

+++++ Love the splash pic (just above the play button). Great textures.

+++ Funny little frames for the button.

++++ Joyful tone.

-- I felt that the colours' saturations were badly chosen. I reckon you should try making the characters (the main focus) MORE saturated than the rest, not less.

--- In the part where they're moving towards the screen, the flowers seem to be going in the wrong direction.

----- Too short. Ends with no conclusion and breaks the rhythm horribly.

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I was pleasantly surprised at how much I enjoyed this submission, with its chirpy mood. Disappointed when it ended.

I suggest you keep going.

Cheerful.

__The Good__
I really liked the graphics, nice use of characters and the backgrounds looked great. The style of this flash was good too, it brought a smile to my face. The song used in this was great, very cheerful and it brought back some nice memories. I thought this flash was done very well.

__The Bad__
It ended too abruptly. You should of made a music video useing the whole song, it would have been great! Cutting it short like that kinda killed the whole flash.

__Over All__
A flash with a good song. Nice job on this flash, keep up the good work!

{Review Request Club}

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This was a very good flash, but a few things let it down. First of all, it ended way too abruptly. You should've made it longer, and end not so suddenly. Also, it just went back to the original Play button. Why not have a Replay button? The music fit very well with the flash, and the graphics and style were excellent.

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AWARDS:

Graphical Achievement | Clock Crew Wannabe | HappyHappyHappy Award | Abrupt Ending Award

3/5
* Review Request Club
~ Z

RampageSun responds:

well eehhh thanks for the feedback yeah sorry it ended too soon part 2 is bit long but be warned it will also cut off Like first one But the part 3 is still being made and will be full version.
Not a CC wannabe/Happy award I will take/abrubpt ending award...eerrmmm still in question heh.
3/5 score Not bad thanks its not a bad score or good its ranked as fair so i thank you for that.
I was RampageClock But now I formed into RampageSun and joined up with the SunMafia.
~RampageSun~

Cool

The graphics were good and the animation was too. The loops were cool too. The style of this is good because it's original. It's a sun mafia. The sound was really funny. It was all happy jolly. There was no violence. You couldv'e finished the movie with a rocket hitting them at the end. The humor was there too. The preloader button made me laugh.

Overall, to improve, finish the movie on a different note; It just stopped abruptly. Also, add some violence.

3/5
Review Request Club

RampageSun responds:

Thanks Homer Dough Im pleased you liked it yeah were all about being heppy go lucky and have fun frollik in the flowers and fly into space and just have a good time and dont worrie the next one will be full version and wont stop abruptly.
Thank you for the possotive feedback and we will finnish the next one promise.
~RampageSun~

K

^^Good Points^^
You made a good impression on me with the preloader in this movie, which is very pleasing graphically. A good preloader is always a good place to start. The graphics throughout this movie were just as good. Good drawings and nice animations. They went along with the song as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm really disappointed that you guys didn't bother to finish the song, or at least stop in a better place. If you want to make a name for yourself, then you should definitely make full movies that people will enjoy more.

Review Request Club.

RampageSun responds:

Me and the SM are happy you like our stuyle and graphic layout on our animations its also make me happy that you are honest and mature that you dident leave mean review but instead you are honest and constructive in your point.
Yes I do say we did mess up on this and did not finnish it and it dident finnish with the song but we will fix this and make it longer to the end of the music.
again thank you for your honest review.
~RampageClock~

Credits & Info

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5,378
Faves:
2
Votes
15
Score
3.06 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 24, 2006
8:05 AM EST
Genre
Spam