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Merry Christmas from Thrustermation!
After the success of last years (And the success its having this holiday season) I couldn't resist making another Christmas E-Card for all you folks.
Once again, 56K Friendly.
pretty cool. not great animation, but a funny premise. keep em' rollin.
This was an ok submission. The graphics were average, hencing the fact that there were some parts where you colored sloppy. One example would be the wall. The overall joke was a bit dry. You should have made the little kid at least move it's arms or laugh an evil laugh to make it more dramatic or interesting. The voice acting was not to good nor too bad. It was alright. One major flaw to this animation was the lack of animation. The only object or projectile that moved the most were the mouths but that was about it. Next time, try making the characters move more so that they seem more appealing and interesting. As well have some kind of expression on their faces when they experience some kind of change. Overall, this was not bad but I believe you can do better. Good luck on your future submissions.
Summary Points: Ok graphics, Ok theme, average voice acting and nice music, lack of moving objects, or animation.
Not bad, you can see the humor in it, and I might say that you have a promissing future. You have the skills needed to make something, well, not excellent, but that won't get blammed immediately. Try making a longer movie next time, with a bit more contents. I'm sure the people will appritiate the humor.
A glitch to point out,
At the end, if you click replay, the music is still playing, you may wanna sort that out.
Fixed, thank you.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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