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Great story great action
Now i must say this was pretty impressive, the "STORY" was very impressive and its the kind that gets better with each new part, and kept me interested and just wanting more of that, so nice work on the story and pushing it forward, And all the action too cant forget all that fun of the flash, And lets get to the "MUSIC" that was just perfect and fit so well with everything going on, and there was alot to see and do, so props to you there, i just love the amount of effort you put fourth on this and your other flash works, all great and with some fantastic quality, So anyways great work from the verty start, i dont have much in improvment tips as you did fantasticly well to grasp the audiance and keep the story going and keeping the interest. especially of this viewer and reviewer, so on that note keep up the awsome work, i look forward to much more of your work. So keep at it and grace us with more of your work soon again.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvment points well just keep it going add even more story because it was pretty fantastic from start to finish.
i liked it
that was a pretty we;; done flash. only thing is the camera was a kinda wiggly and the screen was to small. anyway that looked like it would be very hard to animate. good job!
cool but the music is more of a fail than the containment
wats da song? ummm... the screen was vereh small
Pretty good. Difficult to enjoy.
Good animation and whatnot. The music quality was good so it wasn't hard to listen to. Unfortunately the very thin screen made it hard to watch, and in the end you really didn't do anything new. Nothing wrong with sticking to the basics though.
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A magical, musical adventure for the whole family!
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