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**PLEASE SUBMIT TO CHRISTMAS COLLECTION**
**THE NOOBY BEGINNING PART IS JUST ONE PART, PLEASE WATCH TIL END**
A Young Man Gets fed up with NG. And unleashes his anger.
Wait until after the credits for some easter eggs in "Fun Movie Facts"
it was an alright animation.... but way way too short. i think that this one could've done a lot better had it been longer. it was alright to watch and your efforts were nice, but i think that this one could've had more potential if it was longer.
oh well, nice try though.
Not very Good...
What does the title have to do with what happens in the flash? Why did the boy lose faith? None of this is explained in the animation. First off, the graphics were average. Not too bad, nor too good. I found this to be very unoriginal or amusing. What was the point to this submission? The lack of sound effects was also a very bad thing. You could have at least put a sound for the gunshot. Also, what does this have to do with Christmas in the first place? Just because the kid askes for a new computer for Christmas, it's Christmas related? This submission needs a lot of work. Next time, try adding sound effects, some kind of plot or storyline or at least something that would make this animation interesting, and try to make it way more longer. The music at the end was obnoxious and loud and didn't have anything to do with Christmas as well. Try changing all of these things and you will have a much better animation. Good luck on your future submissions.
Summary Points: Average Graphics, Poor storyline or Plot, lacks sound effects, obnoxious music, very short, has nothing to do with Christmas.
Dont bother to thank me
Coz I voted 2! lol.
Your graphics were ok.
style - not so good. asking me to vote five was a coffin nail.
sound - draginforce got you the 5
violence - a computer was silently taken out. nah
humour. not great
overall - improve length and subject. please put sounds in too - they go a long way to making or breaking a flash
It was a bit short... But pretty good graphics..
Could have been better
This could have been a great flash if you had made it longer and put a little more story into it. All we see is some kid shooting his computer and telling his mom he wants a new one. Not much to show.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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