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This is my very first flash on Newgrounds so be gentle. This took about 3 days to complete since I wanted to get it done before Christmas Eve which I managed to due. It's short but it's from the heart.
Merry Christmas, Newgrounds and the Lock Legion!
I like the visuals, detailed and plain and simple, thats what I like about most flashes. Your style is great, I like how you used your own voice instead of a speakonia voice, I like some different. Also I like the change in greetings, good one you.
Too short, plus there wasnt much to the background which I found disappointing. Also the voice, seemed, I dont know the word for it, blurred? Anyway you should improve on those key areas.
Good flash, Merry christmas to Newgrounds and the Locks.
oh, we will... we will indeed.
im do not know drawing istiyle are cool the sound are god tol but nothing great
I Love You
I can see that you experiment before you post things up on NG, this is why I love you. All newbies put up reatrded flashes for their first and I Believe they don't need to be on Ng. Well, back on the flash. I liked the art, but the voice wasn't so great, very choppy, only a minor disliking. The text could of been clearer the first time the girl pulled down the white tag. Other than that, great work. 4/5
Thank you for your honest review. I'm very happy you enjoyed my first flash and gave me advice I could use in improving my work. I hope you have a Happy Holidays. ^_^
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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