Score: 5

"Needs Voices."

by: Tovi-Noname

date: December 21, 2006

Not bad at all, good work! You need some voice actors, but other than that, a fairly decent submission.

~Tovi~

Score: 6

"couldnt quite follow the plot..."

by: itsnotwrongtohope

date: December 21, 2006

i got alittle lost in the middle...... but it was a nice intro.... you just need to get their mouths movin!!!!! if you need help let me know!!!!

Score: 7

"Doesn't seem to go anywhere;"

by: Isledeavarice

date: December 21, 2006

This sort of reminds me of most of my stuff in that it had a lot of talking and plot. And was hard to understand - I guess my stuff is too, then. Still, good job. I think I'll watch the first one and then mabye give you a better review.

Score: 5

"Mixed feelings"

by: RichardMV

date: December 21, 2006

I thought that this cartoon had a lot of potential. It had some interesting character interaction, some nice humorous bits, and it looked like a lot of thought and work went into it. I think it still has a ways to go, though. The text often came up so fast that I couldn't read it, and only select characters had voices. If you give some characters voices, you need to give a voice to every character. If you fix those problems, I think you'll have a rather decent flash cartoon. Good luck, and have a wonderful holiday ^_^.