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NOT MY VOICE, DAMMIT!
Anyways, happy holidays, one and all.
It was a bit rushed, and my friend put in the funny text at the end.
PaulYates, feel free to review, I'll respond.
This was better than some of your other works, but the ZAGR.........eh, I just don't like it. The voices weren't really good, but overall it was pretty good.
A turd in a stocking.
Yet another awful Flash made by you. It suffers from the exact same problems as all your other Flashes. Problems which I have pointed out to you on numerous occasions, yet you seem to do nothing about it.
The graphics were rushed and didn't look good at all. It would have been nice if you'd put a little time in to getting them to at least look alright. As always the animation was absolutely hideous, since apart from one character for 3 seconds, nothing whatsoever was redrawn, which made the movement look completely wrong. If you weren't going to bother to redraw various things, you should have motion tweened rather than moving all the bits a little bit in each seperate frame. That way the movement would have flowed smoothly rather than being choppy, which made this animation even worse than it already was. The backgrounds were even worse than the characters themselves. Modify>Bitmap>Trace Bitmap seldom looks good. Using these awful backgrounds throughout the entire Flash was far from a good idea. The worst part of this Flash graphics-wise were the white things at the start with text on, since I have no idea what they supposed to be, since again they were rushed drawings.
Again the choices of sound was awful. The footsteps sounded wrong and were also too loud and irritating. The voice acting was horrendous and at times it wasn't too easy to understand due to the sound quality being so bad. Subtitles would have been a welcome addition.
The story was extremely dull and completley lacked any originality, making this a chore to sit through. Try putting a little more thought into what exactly you're going to make. A good storyline is the most important thing when it comes to a movie. If there isn't one, the audience will find themselves extremely bored. The Flash was made even worse by the awful attempts at humour; an exploding present, aliens being sent flying through the air, aliens falling over and some other completely unoriginal, unfunny jokes thrown in.
When you make your next Flash bear these things in mind, otherwise you're going to end up with yet another hideous Flash to your name.
Have you ever seen Invader ZIM?
OK, I knew you would say something like this, so I'm fixing these preoblems fo rmy next flash :)
Hope to see you then :)
that was nice but i have a question how come in one part when dib gave zim the present he like flew away and how did u do that backround cause that was cool. but also srry to tell u the sound was a little iffy i know its not your voice but still anyway over all nice flash i fived it
p.s. gir pwns
Dib can fly, so can Gaz, lol. The sound sucks, but no one wanted to record their own voices, so I had to go with making them with Audacity.
That BG isn't mine, I used a feature to trace it, because it looked better.
The feature is sometimes use dto make sprites into actual cartoons :)
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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