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pretty good, i liked it.
pretty good ,i liked it. it was good. 4/5. good work.nice flash.
if it was great that would be good, but if it was excelent, that'd be great lol. But seriously, to the previous reveiw, (not that hes gonna come back and read this), if you thought the story line was confusing, you're an idiot lol. His GF left him and then came back to him on christmas... kinda poorly written, could've also been, his girlfriend wasnt there on christmas but managed to show up against the odds...anyway. this was pretty much crap, no back grounds, cheap animation, limbless usualy sucks unless it's done professionally. And when you do a serious flash, try to include character devolopment and of course, great visuals(it cant look cartooney and stupid).
No Backgrounds? There was backgrounds on every part.
1. animation to "simple"
2. the story was bad and confusing
3 the sound was allright but lots of room for improvment
I like the idea and the concept, but the artwork was too simple for my tastes. Other than that, everything was great.
Thanks, i'll try to make them better, i'm improving, hopefully, lol.
nice and simple
i liked it.. simple but awesome
Thank you, :).
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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