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Where can I stab...

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This is my first real flash. Like I said in the credits I didn't have a lot of time to make this flash since there was a deadline.
But do check it out.

This was a video i submitted to my highschool music video contest, thats what the yearbook DVD bit at the end is about.

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Quite Unexpected, Good Job!

I thought this would be some kind of emo movie as people like to use that term a lot nowadays cutting himself. Surprisingly enough, it was a music video. The graphics had some flaws to it, and the animations weren't the best in the world, but it was good enough to watch it. I thought it was pretty good, just work on the graphics a lil bit and make it a lil bit more longer and this flash would be CRUNK, FO SHIZZLE 5 R!

HAWTHORNE HEIGHTS!!!!!!

I would've been mad if you mislead me with that title but you didn't. So you didn't waste my time!!!!!

GOOD JOB!!!!!

HAWTHORNE HEIGHTS ROCKS!!!

Pretty good

I like the concept, but it wasn't the best I have ever seen. Need a little bit of a story line also, other then that it was good.

Well damn.

You've got my 5 man. This was a very good flahs movie. A fucking awsome one for your first one out there :D.

Graphics- 7, There good. But there were some flaws in them. I understand you were animating under a deadline. I know how that feels. But you did a damn fine job.

Style- 10, I dont know what the movie was about. But fuck. It got my attention and i loved it.

I still dont know. Why did you call the movie "Where can i stab" Is that the song name or somthing?. Meh oh well.

5/5 You got my 5. :D

Freelanced responds:

thanks alot

it really encourages me to do better and continuing to improve myself.

thanks again for the comment!

Very good effort.

First of all, i like the song, and your improvisational storyline was very well put. I read how your computer crashed and stuff, good to see you had the determination to finish your first good flash. Keep it up.

Kitty.

Freelanced responds:

Yes, although it is true that the crash was a horrible waste of mt time and sanity it taught me never to procrastinate, not even a little

next time ill be more experienced to work not only harder but smarter

and to backup often

lol.

Credits & Info

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1,922
Votes
9
Score
4.11 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 20, 2006
3:04 PM EST