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This was my first sprite movie ever!!! so go easy. I had submitted it before but took it off and redid some things. this will be the last posting of it. Thanks to Tutorialized.com and Newgrounds forums for the help with this short project.
I like the uniqueness and originality of your flash, especially for the first time. I rated you a 7 based upon your current skill level when the flash first came out. Well I have seen better but I've seen far worst. I liked how you pitted yourself against sprite. Your lining up of your animation was pretty well on cue. But it's choppy as you have noticed from previous reviews. Increase frame/second would help out with it. I can't wait to see more from you. Keep up with the good works.
lol you get a 9 for originality
A little slowy
Is good, but for you next animation try to use a bigger Frame Rate, 30 fps is really good for sprites, and make highly destructive attacks like MvC, they are really funny and the people likes speed
That was insanely awesome.
Music choice was pure genius.
Your graphics were excellent and the clips of yourself and the sprites lined up perfectly-bravo!
Humor: 0 (as should be-that's good)
I feel you could have made this longer. This was a very good flash and it's almost unbelievable that this is your first sprite flash.
Please continue with this kind of animation! I'll be looking forward to more of your flashes in the future!
it was ok
i liked your concept of this...but the animation seemed a bit too choppy. Increase your FPS a little more. and complete your story...it ended abruptly...but all in all, this was ok.
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