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Dec 17, 2006 | 3:01 PM EST

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Well its been a long time coming. This is Shin ArkAngel. My last animation using Flash MX, thank god...Forgive the dated looks.
I dont really have anything to say other than enjoy it and constuctive critism only please and I'd be happy to answer any questions you might have.

Reviews


Masklin8Masklin8

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I liked it!

It seems like you put a lot of effort in this animation. It came vary well!

A few sugestions:
-Check your typos ("absorbers").
-The font you used is hideous. HIDEOUS.
-The boy in the bike changes his skin color once. Check that.
-Try having a little more of line quality, it appears too thin and uninteresting, maybe scan your artwork instead of drawing in the computer, maybe use pressure-sensiteve a tablet.

Great job, keep them coming!



Darc-LegendDarc-Legend

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good

It seemed like a decent start for a series.
I'll repeat the tired line about maybe finding some good voice actors; that'll probably be easier now that you've got something sweet to showcase.

One thing that bugged me: Nothing kills "Dramatic text" like a misspelled word.

Spellcheck every word you put into your flash at least twice, its something simple to do (but many forget to do) and makes it look soooo much better.

-DK



MintySagaraMintySagara

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Looking Foraward to seeing this evolve...

I'm sure people are saying that this is, "Soooo Eureka 7" or, "SO0o0o0o0 Evangelion". However I do think that this can be a great series in its own right. You need to do somethings.

1.) VOICE ACTING! There has to be people you can round up to make a great cast for. Save dialouge bubbles for captions.

2.) A bit frame skippy. I know you said it was done in MX, so I hope to see something much smoother, especially with anime mouths.

3.) Lose the part thing. Unless, it's a really clever preloader in between scenes, it seems like your ripping it off of anime. Origionality is key if you want this to grow, and I want to see it grow!



MpGrillMpGrill

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great

Great animation!
It reminds me of final fantasy because there is no voice acting...
You should put some background music...



DisgaeaDisgaea

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Ok but...

The sound really really drags it down. The music choice for example didnt quite go with the scene (Playing Sentimental Generation like that seems really really weird given the location. Maybe if he had some head phones..) and the sounds seemed out of place at time. If you were change that up a bit i dare say you would have a vastly improved animation. While the animation could be a little smoother (animation wise) its not really a huge problem overall.