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Dec 17, 2006 | 3:01 PM EST

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Well its been a long time coming. This is Shin ArkAngel. My last animation using Flash MX, thank god...Forgive the dated looks.
I dont really have anything to say other than enjoy it and constuctive critism only please and I'd be happy to answer any questions you might have.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 17, 2006


I can see you have a lot of potential! Forget what others say, i think you've got something here.
You got a 7 for sound, just b/c there was no voice acting. As far as graphics go, your too hard on yourself. I liked them. Also, nice character designs!
If i may offer some assitance, I'm a writer myself you see, and i just wanna say that if you write down a plot line, then generate characters you want influencing the plot line down. You can make the story as simple or complex as you want it to be! As a visionary writer, i see huge possibility with this flash of yours.
Keep working on it, and don't get discouraged!
Heres to more soon!

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 17, 2006

What the Hell Eureka Seven!

Interesting animation, but it looks a hell lot like Eureka Seven on Adult Swim.

Son-Finale responds:

Aye and if you check the credits you'll notice I list all of my influances.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 17, 2006

story was great but...

it really needs voices and i noticed a few spelling mistakes but with fixes i think it will be great


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 17, 2006

don't look to bad

the story and art work aren't to bad, but the animation could do with improving and i only really think speech bubbles work for comics, subtitle style text would been better in my opinion..
overall its a good animation


Rated 5 / 5 stars December 17, 2006

what is the story of this cartoon?

Are they young hotshot misfit pilots, doing wacky and crazy things, and shooting down the enemy in likewise wacky and crazy ways?