Score: 3
"I'm not convinced"
date: May 26, 2007
Well, looking at this, you really need to work on the basketball guy. It looks horrible, the way his shadow moves on him when the dribbles the ball. It's not like the light is flickering behind him, so why change the shadows on parts of him that aren't moving?
You are showing newbies to flash how to do the basics, which is good. The problem really comes when you don't quite have the handle on the techniques yourself. Basically what I'm trying to say is practice more first, before wading in and trying to teach people how to do it.
Don't view this as an attack on you personally, there are other people that do this, but if you cna learn to do the stuff right, you can create good tutorials for here.
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Author's Response:
About the stick's shadow: It didn't do that in flash, I dunno why it did it here.
About your second paragraph: These are basic things.
