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the potal system 1 s.e.

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everyone was voting low cause of no sound so i added music and extended this movie. enjoy :)

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is ok but the controls r not good at all is a bit like portal 1 thay shud up date this to portal 2 :P

A bit boring

As i said it was a bit boring, it could have been ALOT better like maybe a story line... but as people say its been done, good work tho

meh

like i said MEH!!!!!

Hi Jake!

Guess who this is????! Its Steve! From last year! Great movie! Just make it a bit longer, make the blood a bit darker, and give the movie arms and legs! Its looks stange floating around like that! Other than that, great job!

Da-raven responds:

thanks for the ideas.
responses to ideas:
1. longer: insead of making it longer, I may try to make a longer sequel, I dont have flash at the moment, but i will get it back to enter the metal gear collab.
2. blood darker: ill put that in the sequel
3. no arms + legs: i may add some floating hands for the movie, but to add fully connected arms & legs takes like 4x as long to animate, & i dont have the time & patience to make that

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought the music was the best part in this. It really had the effect of making this more dramatic. The movie wasn't too bad. I like the idea of having to fight off the 0's.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like the ending at all. It was sort of an open ending, but not really the good time. You didn't have any of the blam/protect process afterward. It was a little dissatisfying.

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Views
3,141
Votes
17
Score
3.08 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 15, 2006
5:20 PM EST