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Thanks to Leek Clock for his great voice acting.
It's nice to see how much you are progressing here in Flash from your earlier movies. Your graphics are much better. Great drawings with lots of details in this movie. The voice acting was very good as you credited Leek for. Clear voice acting and pretty powerful stuff. Did you come up with the rhymes yourself? They were very clever!
I think you could have done a little better with the violence. The song led to a lot of detail, but your animations and drawings weren't as such.
Pretty good! The graphics were very nice, the narrator's voice suited the animation very well also. The animation was quite good too. Pretty smooth. The only flaw to this movie was the lack of sound effects. The only sound effect there was at the beginning, that of a shotgun. When the teacher was running around the classroom with a sword, you could have included a stabbing sound that would have conveyed the killing. I can understand that maybe the sound effects would had messed the narrator up and you wouldn't have been able to hear him quite well but by adding the sound effects, you could have further elaborated the animation experience. Overall, very nice job on this indeed and good luck on your future submissions.
Everything about it was wonderful. I really liked the way the poem was voiced. Am I zoning out, or was this part of the poem skipped?: "And when the ammo was well spent
with blood on every chair
Silence shuffled forward
with its hands up in the air"
Awsome ^_^ The graphics were nice. I love the voice act. Very good.
Grade Level: A-
How can i complain?
This was sweet! with sweet, sweet violence. I've learned my lesson :D
A short film about a park bench
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