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DOTS! 6 (Aquarium)

December 12, 2006 –
April 5, 2021
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

A brief Flash film about Dots and their trip to a local aquarium. Sea life can be hazardous to your health. Review and let me know what you think! thanks

Music by Tax 5 "Brain Dead", edited by me.

Reviews

And now #6

And here we are again we start off today with number 6, this one was actually entertaining the "GRAPHICS" are simple but I guess thats what makes this work, but wouldnt mind seeing more improvments as the episodes move forward.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I for sure want to see some more shadesand design details in the graphics and maybe going away from the "SOLID" colors aswell.

~X~

Not bad but keep trying

Ok this flash was not to bad however in your next works I would suggest more story line and maby some voice acting or if you have no mic or don't have a good one text bubbles would work as well. Over all you get a passing grade but you need to retake the class D+

LMFAO

funny as hell

good one

but not as good as the tramplene one tho!!!!! i thought it was god tho!!!! not long enough.

<deleted> responds:

hahaha! thanks for your review =P

O.O

I forgot all about deez. I like dots ^_^

Looks like PenguinLink put alot of good criticism up there, even went so far as to encourage you to make another one. I liked the music, it fits the dots theme, not the environment. :P
You already have your own style. The fact that you keep coming up with ideas is a good sign. I am a huge fan of aquariums, so you get my points on this one. I am also looking forward to the next one, but I will always love 6 the best ;P

<deleted> responds:

i personally felt Dots 6 to be my weakest one so far. but thanks for your review.

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3.21 / 5.00