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Graphics - The GOOD graphics were from Clock Crew FLA's. The other graphics were terrible.
Style: The theme was good, but no real plot, as well as the movement was too fast.
Violence: No blood
Interactivity: Play button
Humor: There was no humor, nor do I think you intended to put any in it.
Overall: It was kinda...meh.
The sunmafia and the ng tank were drawn pretty good. But the backgrounds and the wiisun were pretty bad drawn. he style is alright because it's a different series. The sound was matched up good. There was violence with the wii but it was so fast, i barely saw anything. After that it was just a black screen.
Overall, work on the backgrounds, slow down the fight, have a story, take out the join us (put it in the end and beginning of flash instead), and most of all, finish it.
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+ concept of sun mafia amuses vaguely.
++ NG tank and characters fairly well drawn.
+ nice sega-style text.
-- horrible, scrawled graphics for the most part.
-- 'join us' seemed badly placed. Like maybe have it at the start, then at the end. Clicking during the movie, to find the movie carries on, is irritating.
---- Movie ends suddently with no conclusion. Nothing of note really happense.
----- After it ends (just after meeting the Wiisun with the lightsaber, we get a black screen for ages.
It just seems like a broken, unfinished flash.
For your next one, take more time and care.
~Review Request Club~
Well the main graphics such as graphics for characters were done pretty well although I noticed some of the backgrounds needed some work. The music was suprisingly good. It seemed to go with the flash well.
one thing I didn't likle was the huge "Join Us" in the top of the screen. It seemed more of a blockaid then an add. A simple one in the bottom right-hand corner would be fine. Other then the tank, the animation wasn't to interesting. I would of sugested using stick legs.
An Okay movie but room for improvment.
ok... the join us is supposed to be there,if not.. no one will see it. or join :P
I liked the music. Not often I hear a song like "Festival of Ghost" in a submission, so good job on having a unique tune. The graphics weren't too bad. Your characters were drawn good, and some other parts had good details too, like the lightsabers. The animations weren't bad either.
This seems to be just a bunch of random events to me. There isn't much concurrence in the events that unfold in this movie, which I didn't like. And really, I didn't like the idea of a Sun Mafia. Just seems like a cheap ripoff to me. So far, you haven't earned my respect.
Review Request Club.
Is a group,which wants to help the cc and make allies with them. thanks for the review though.
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