okay
it was an alright animation and your efforts were nice.... but this one was way way too short. i think a lot of this animations potential was robbed because it was so short. nice try though.
Author Comments
This is my very first animation. I tried differents things to see the result. I think you can undertstand the meaning.
(Sorry for my english, and for the "Jouer" button)
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Wow thanks for the reviews!!! I didn't expect such construtive critisism! I realize that the movie is too short, I'll try to improve on this for my next ones. And maybe improve on the story line too. Thanks again newgrounds! (And again, sorry for my baadd english!)
(( Notbad ))
~~REVIEW~~
This was short but it was notbad i liked it and had some good music aswell, the character could also have abit more detail to him aswell, other then that it was notbad.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer more characters and story.
~~OVERALL~~
Decent there could be more to it though, nice start though.
~X~
Very good for your first animation!
In comparison to some of the other firsts I have watched, this rates pretty high. The graphics are great, it has a nice little plot and the sound fits in right!!! Some day in the near future, I think you will become a great flash artist.
Great..
That was really great for your first flash.. I gave you a 2/5
Look forward to seeing more from you ^^
c'était court mais bonbon
i really liked it even though it was so short keep this up and you'll be great
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3.73 / 5.00
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- Dec 9, 2006
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