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This is a bunch of recent and old movies put together, but sound and better endings have been added to the old movies. Please leave a review if this is awesome or terrible.
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there is a lot in here, including some good elements, but most of it is not great and could do with a fair bit of work. Its certainly worth a pass, but I dont think you are doing yourself justice at present:
The quiz is fine, except that most of the stuff is pretty familiar on the web, including here in NG. Of course, the choice of music is liekly to be popular, but uploading a popular theme tuen is not a great acheivement- lol.
The fireworks were nice, I don't know it is an original idea, but I certainly havent seen it before. However, it could be made better with a buildup to a finale- a set of two or three big rockets, followed by the traditional burning 'Good Night' like they usually have at firework display- also where was the Catherine Wheel? Not only is that my favourtie but lighting the fuse and then wathcing it happen would be great. How about fountains- the ladies favourite!
Yeah, finale - ie come to an end- which leads on to my next thing...
The final stickman thing. its notm by any means the worst stick man fight on NG, but why put htis in and spoil a flash, when we are SO fed up with stickmen fighting and surely you know this cannot compete with any of the strings of very good ones. If you didn't know it was a loop I cant imagine how you though it was going to end?
generally, I notice a few strips of white edge, which you cant see when you make it- you need to use a different coloured background background, so this shows up when you publish it and check all flash thouroughly befoee uploading.
I would say this flash is OK and its worth working on
Not that bad...
Grapics could use some work, but not too bad...also, the guy with the sword at the end just loops...
I had no idea that he looped. It's not like i used a short movie clip or anything like that!
okay I'm Gonna try to be nice about this.........
When I come on NGit seems that even though we have mostly amatuers on here they still put out some pretty inventive and entertaining stuff. But this was simply rehashes of other things that have been out, pre-prepared backgrounds, sticks, and synth music. I'm sorry man but I personally prefer quality over quantity, exept for when I get paid. I see promise in you however young one. Don't lose faith, and keep workin at it.
I liked this...
Graphics: Nothing amazing, but this type of flash doesn't need amazing graphics.
Style: It wasn't all that original, but alas this is still a creative flash.
Sound: Nothing here that I should really say.
Violence: Kinda. Although I really hate this category as it makes it seem as if violence is good. I really don't care that much about the amount of violence.
Interactivity: Well theres a quiz and... er... a mini-menu... so yeah.
Humor: Meh. Nothing "hilarious" here.
Overall: Very nice job! You get FOUR cookies.
you remind me of this annoying person i know who sarcastically says "you get a cookie" whenever you say something obvious. I hope this wasn't sarcastic.
For an artist starting off, and or one who has created a few, no flash is crap. It seems you got some script working which is nice... a mini menu.. also good. Besides this, was any average flash. Good luck in the future padawan.
Thanks for the compliments, sometimes i just feel like making new flashes by ripping off my old ones. eventually i will make one that is huge with about 15 items on the menu.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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