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This is my first cartoon, which i made with toon boom studios....
Could be better...
This was actually quite funny but it could be a hell of alot better. All you need to do is add a preloader and turn up the jpeg quality in flash settings to get rid of the pixels. Then you might have a half decent animation.
i liked it but you should add a preloader using flash but otherwise the pixels didnt bother me this was really good for a first keep it up
it was alright....
but try not to use jpegs in your future movies as it makes the graphics look a poor quality... i see potential in your work tho... keep it up!
Desperately needs a preloader- it played in little bits til it loaded- I will give you 20 minutes to put one in before I vote! Also needs a stop at the end, preferably with a replay button. If you cant do replay button yet then put in a stop and put in text telling us to right click and Rewind.
To put in a stop just click on the last frame in any layer; go into Actions, click the empty space and type Esc, S, T.
It needs proper credits- music and stuff.
Some nice art, decent story, OK animation- baisc but OK. I was amusied by the Christ mas Tree expanding out of the sack.
Funny message at the end.
make your profile available so people can pm you now you are an author!
for a first timer, this is a good flash. Funny twist at the end. This gets a 4/5. Good work.
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