Score: 8

"nice one"

by: KWAS71KCK

date: December 4, 2006

that was a very nice animation. the storyline to this one was very nice. i think it cold've been extended a bit, but overall, this one was very impressive. you were saying not to expect a "full-blown, out-of-this-world toon", but as far as i'm concerned, it was pretty pretty close to being that.

Score: 8

"hose that watch"

by: Bezman

date: November 30, 2006

++ Lovely text. All kinda looks like it was written with a vertically held brush.

+++ jpg textures make it look more interesting.

+ Cool little 'play button'.

+ Cute stule of figures, with the simplified shapes and shading.

--- Terrible lip synching.

- At the end, the white edges of the objects kinda irritated my eye.

- Surely you could have used a nicer looking texture? Better than a blank screen

++ Lovely details in background - prices of fishballs etc, spinning fans...

++ pixellated backgrounds kinda help direct the eye.

+++ Great shimmering and pouring effects on the tea.

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I loved this. Watched 4 times, no joke.

Simple but heartwarming.

I assume this was for television. I'm sure those that watched it would have been smiling - just as I was - by the end.

Score: 8

"Some excellant art!"

by: IceDragon64

date: November 30, 2006

The car, look of the kopitiam from the outside, the look of the tea with the light on it, the pouring. Yes, Excellant- up with the best.

Roof tiles were good but could be better. Faces plain and not up to the same standard.

Animation good- some good angles. Excellant dog panting!

The little story was nothing special, but it was a pleasant change. I note its all your own sound and music too, well done!

Submit more- I want to see more of your work!

Score: 8

"Nice, but can improve on sound."

by: pulaki

date: November 30, 2006

As said on the title. The style is great, the background music is nice. Reminded me of my own childhood memory, too. However, the voiceovers can get a little fixing. The volume was quite low and inbalanced with the background music.

Keep posting! I like your style.

Score: 9

"Woah"

by: LegolasFIN

date: November 30, 2006

U got skill :) Keep going and u will be at front page soon. im more than sure about that!